Comments & Reviews

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• BittenKitten Oct 05, 2008, 1:07 pm

[chapter 1]

Even though this is the second time I have read this it still makes the same wham of impact!

Sigh...so hot and so beautiful and so perfect...

*Drifts off in an incoherent cloud*

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• Reyn Oct 04, 2008, 9:42 pm

[general comment]

Oh...my...God. Hina, that was seriously the hottest thing ever! To be able to convey so much emotion in so few words! You have so much talent!! It makes me want to try this, but at the same time not cuz I'm scared I'd fail in comparison to you!

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• Until-time-ends Sep 29, 2008, 9:31 pm

[general comment]

We've been talking a lot in my Advanced English class about the difference between showing and telling in writing. You did a great, lovely job at showing.
I really loved all the emotions expressed. Very real. <3