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Until-time-ends Oct 14, 2008, 10:01 pm

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Wow, this is way awesome.

Very well-written and thought-provoking.

Nicotine Sep 29, 2008, 2:25 pm

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The end made me very sad (as I suspect it's supposed to) XD. Very eloquent. You really captured what goes through the mind of a soldier and how his emotions change.

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Ami Sep 23, 2008, 12:28 pm

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Awe ... that ending is like baaamooo. A part of me died inside, too, Mr. Troop, you're not alone!! I love your writing poems Serenade ... you're so awesome.

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