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mignonne422 Dec 02, 2008, 1:34 pm

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*blinks*

That was amazing! I just read all three chapters sweetie and got swept up into the fascinating world you've created. It's so rich and alluring. Naruto and Sasuke are so vivid in just a few chapters and I'm hooked on your story. I want to know more. Need to know more! I flailed and despaired that there wasn't more to read! That's the sign of a killer story to me. Can't wait for more. I'm so excited!

Stars of gold for you!!

Zrina Dec 02, 2008, 4:34 am

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This is really awesome! I can't wait to read more! I really like how Sasuke is so obsessed, lol, and Hinata isn't that far off either!! XDD

Serenade Dec 01, 2008, 8:12 am

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*sighs* I simply love the idea of Sasuke losing control over a person he doesn't know, having it just eat at him. I'm really excited to see where you take the two of them next!

Adi Dec 01, 2008, 7:48 am

[chapter 3]

YOU GET THEIR CHARACTERS SO RIGHT, AND IT HITS ME, BAM! IN THE CHEST

Dual Nov 27, 2008, 10:46 pm

[chapter 2]

OKAY, BECAUSE YOU'VE RID ME OF ALL SEMBLENCE OF SELF-POSSESSION AND CONTROL: AKLS;FJKLSD YESSSSS. Oh, it's wrong to say "finally" because at only two chapters it's not as if the build up to their meeting has been dragged on for years and years but....the kick it gave when their eyes meet very much had an air of "finally;" if not for the reader, than at least for them. And I love your characterization and I love your writing and I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS

Also, Adi demands I tell you to UPDATE. However, I shan't. Mostly because I know you'll probably spend the rest of your life trying to field her demands. S-so... ~~asdf;j I can't wait for the next chapter and thank you thank you for writing such a pretty, unique piece!!!~~

Dual Nov 27, 2008, 10:39 pm

[chapter 1]

Oh goodness, I love this premise. Naruto as a dreamed figure Sasuke can't get out of his head, then stumbling upon paintings of himself and being absolutely flabbergasted...lkas;dfkl THERE ARE NO WORDS FOR HOW MUCH I ADORE THIS IDEA. Plus, the writing is spectacular, but that's to be expected of you!! Amazingggggg!

anonymous Nov 27, 2008, 4:50 pm

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Wow...I mean wow. This is amazing! I love the idea and I can't wait to see more from you ...it's great thats all i can say...

Adi Nov 27, 2008, 7:16 am

[chapter 2]

ASKLFJDASLKJDASLK

I know I need to learn to leave proper reviews when it comes to your work, but I'm seriously creaming myself over this chapter. Your use of words, your way with the English language is as always perfect and I think will always leave me feeling intensely jealous mixed with the need to find you and hopelessly beg for more.

Oh God, I loved everyone in this, you did a particularly brilliant job with Shikamaru in my opinion and Hinata was pretty damn good too.

But baby please, give me another chapter soon, I'm going to sit on you otherwise.

This fic is like cheesecake to me. PLEASE FEED ME.

questofdreams Nov 23, 2008, 1:49 pm

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azsdlkfjsiei I AM A FAILING THING THAT FAILS FOR NOT REALIZING THIS WAS UPDATED OVER A MONTH AGO DDDDDDDDD8 OMGGGGGGGGGG

FIREUN. FIREUUUNNNNN. WHERE IS THE REST OF THIS?! WHEEEEEEEEERE DDDDDDDDD8 IT'S AMAZING. I LOVE IT. LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE. LOVE LOVE LOVE!!! OMG CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE1!!

>_>;;; *incoherent*

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anonymous Nov 18, 2008, 11:48 pm

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Really well written, I love the idea behind the story, extremely original, I don't think I've read anything like it anywhere before. Your grammar is also very good, kudos, not many can write that well. Keep up the excellent work, I look forward to the next chapter!