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BittenKitten Sep 06, 2008, 4:02 am

[chapter 4]

I am so enjoying this. You have a real...something... Damn it! If I was cleverer I am sure that I would be able to verbalise what it is in your style that gives this such atmosphere. It has a dream like quality and is so beautiful and loving and sad.

BittenKitten Aug 24, 2008, 8:27 am

[general comment]

Oh God, you just broke my heart.

I could never write something like this. I could never make it so simple and heartfelt and real and somehow not depressing.

*Is impressed*

*Is also wailing her head off*

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Reyn Aug 19, 2008, 12:00 pm

[chapter 2]

LoL! I love the idea of big risks including jumping off the high dive XD That was cute.

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Reyn Aug 19, 2008, 11:53 am

[chapter 1]

Interesting....*continues on*