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- Maybe If It Rains
- [Review]
- Author: Until-time-ends
- Comments: 2
- Replies: 0
- Archived: July 18, 2008
- Updated: July 18, 2008
- Reyn Jul 20, 2008, 8:57 am
- BittenKitten Jul 19, 2008, 1:05 pm
[general comment]
I enjoyed how good your dialogue was in this, Roxas is wonderfully grumpy and teenage and I love how everyone and everything (including the weather) is out to get him/help him. And I like that before they even kiss Roxas is already worrying about how Axel is going to want more. Because that was exactly how I felt before my own first kiss! Such a worrysome time all round really!
