Comments & Reviews

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• questofdreams Jul 16, 2008, 8:16 am

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wow, I like the completely opposite take you took on the poem from the original :3 You have some very lovely and concrete images in your lines ^_^

Also ^^;;; what Adi said, it's preferred that you post numerous short poems like this into one story, with multiple "chapters" like what BK did here: [link]

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• BittenKitten Jul 16, 2008, 2:28 am

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Comparing love to cancer, very striking, brave and effective, I like it!

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• Adi Jul 16, 2008, 12:23 am

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Striking purple blows I love that

Also if you're posting several poems, it would be better to post them as a collection in one submission