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- The Beer Trap
- [Review]
- Author: rachilde
- Comments: 8
- Replies: 4
- Archived: July 14, 2008
- Updated: July 14, 2008
- anonymous Aug 07, 2008, 11:26 pm
- Reyn Jul 22, 2008, 12:42 am
[chapter 1]
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That...was beautiful. And angsty. And while I'm glad it didn't have a completely sad ending, I'm still glad it wasn't a happy ending either (which is an odd thing for me to say, considering that's what I live for). It was a realistic ending....and I heart Yamamoto so much for how he responded <3
And now, if you'll excuse me, it's two in the morning and I really should get to sleep...XD
- questofdreams Jul 17, 2008, 2:57 pm
[general comment]
SO EVEN THOUGH THEY DIDN'T TECHNICALLY BREAK UP AT THE END, THIS FIC STILL MADE MY HEART BLEEEEED D: Hibari was so mean ;__; and the HibariRyohei JUST TO SPITE US was also mean but I'll grant you it since you did finish this :3
Your writing is always soooo much fun to read *_* Maybe it's how you structure your sentences, or how you choose your words so carefully. In any case, you MADE ME KIND OF LIKE BIANCHI which is amazing in itself LOL and I'm pretending at the end of that, Yamamoto and Gokudera go cuddle in bed and live happily ever after >_>;;; like...existentially... or something >_>;;
ILUDANIELLEANDIMISSYOU TT________TT
- JenniferPlague Jul 14, 2008, 9:25 pm
[general comment]
" 'No,' Gokudera had said. 'Because it's not love, it's be Fate.' "
Anyway, OHGOD THAT WAS AWESOME. I like twisted!fic. A lot. Good, good job. Also, if you do anything on LJ, be a kind soul and post a link to it on the Hibari community (antiherbivore) 'cause they've got a grand total of, um, two stories. XD
