Comments & Reviews

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• dokudoku Sep 29, 2008, 10:37 pm

[general comment]

[general comment]

Had to re-read some of these to get through the newest chapters and I have to say they're all so beautifully strung together. I really liked your portrayal of Chrome and Hibari's relationship. It's like it's there but not :")

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• Ami Sep 05, 2008, 11:20 am

[chapter 1]

Whawwt (don't ask me how to pronounce that ... "wought" maybe?)!!
This is so beautifully written!! I don't know anything about Hitman but I love how it opens and I love the ending ... and I love the middle! You have just crafted the most beautiful sandwich I have ever read (hahah, whawt?!). I wish I could write like that ... I love those long sentences; reading them all in one in a slightly thoughtful voice makes me so ... I dunno! I just love it.

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• Reyn Jul 20, 2008, 9:10 am

[chapter 2]

Congratulations. You have me convinced there is something very very off with Kyoko (will never be looking at her the same way ever again)

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• Reyn Jul 20, 2008, 9:06 am

[chapter 1]

I must say, I loved Reborn's portrayal, as brief as it was XD

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• BittenKitten Jul 18, 2008, 12:26 am

[chapter 2]

This is just lovely. You paint such pictures in sound and scent and I love how you write about food and her peaceful state so that it comes through the words themselves, all gently.

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• BittenKitten Jul 15, 2008, 5:50 am

[chapter 1]

This is a very effective stream of consciousness insight into his mind. It's full of textures, the sand, the cloth, sounds. I always think that this style of writing should be like that, with a background hum that gives a total expression of one moment of existance.

And I especially admire it because it's a style that I just can't do!!