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- Of Sarcasm and Angst, but Mostly Sarcasm
- [Review]
- Author: BittenKitten
- Comments: 20
- Replies: 1
- Archived: July 11, 2008
- Updated: November 12, 2008
- Adi Nov 12, 2008, 4:57 pm
- questofdreams Nov 12, 2008, 12:02 pm
[general comment]
ROFLMAO <3 STILL LOVE IT XDDDDD ADI SHOULD BE GRATEFUL FOR HER IGOR <3
- requiem Nov 12, 2008, 8:15 am
[general comment]
Heh. My personal favourite is the first one. Amazing how one word can say so much. XD
A Sinner Takes Tea With God should become a classic in poetry or something....
- Until-time-ends Nov 12, 2008, 6:42 am
[chapter 6]
BK, you're so brilliant.
Great imagery.
Kinda made me giggle. You and Adi are so silly.
- garfield Oct 16, 2008, 6:35 am
[chapter 5]
Short and sweet...and effective...it made my skull actually tingle momentarily
- chupachup Aug 24, 2008, 10:39 pm
[general comment]
Omgosh, I was so unfamiliar w/ this section it took me like 5 minutes to find the 'review' button LOL! :D
Hahaha, I saw the first page and was like wow! "Bastard"! Succint, to the point ;) And then I realized there were like 4 other chapters of poetry ^^; *failed*
I like the fairy tale almost quality of ch. 3 or 4 (I forget), like how the dialogue is in there. Very creative :)
(and btw uM!!! :D i are ochibau and proud!)
- Loika Aug 23, 2008, 1:33 am
[general comment]
The fact that the first chapter only had the word "bastard" was like the slamming of a door. Well done.
My favourite sections besides:
- The creature I’m sketching in verses
- I sat in the cinema
Watching the square
And feeling my skull spinning
Under my hair
There's something very -- and I'm not sure lovely is the right word, but -- about the imagery you evoked with those lines. I enjoyed it. :)
(Also, ADI IS GENERAL SEME.)
- Ami Aug 22, 2008, 9:32 pm
[general comment]
I like the Sinner and God one! Be being a Christian, I guess it entertains me on a certain level, hehe!
I also think the first one is very funny though I don't think I get it, haha!
Your poems flow very well and are very fun to read. I probably only understand the surface, because I'm not very deep but I enjoyed reading your poems anyway!
I ARE OCHIBAU AND PROUD
- N3L Aug 22, 2008, 9:06 pm
[chapter 2]
'__' >_< '__' This reminds me of events that I'd rather not think about. The last stanza makes me want to draw though. o_o Hmmmmm.
(I ARE OCHIBAU AND PROUD.)
