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- Wrong Side of Normal
- [Review]
- Author: Ladelle
- Comments: 21
- Replies: 11
- Archived: June 16, 2008
- Updated: October 11, 2008
- anonymous Oct 19, 2008, 1:04 pm
- IvvyMoon Oct 14, 2008, 2:04 pm
[general comment]
Oh my gosh, Ladelle, this is too awesome. The tension is incredible. I want more! What will Sasuke see? What will Naruto do? You have me on the edge of my seat!
- YuukoUchiha Sep 11, 2008, 10:11 am
[chapter 4]
Aw~ poor little Naru-chan, I'm very empathic, but I think I can't imagine having powers like he does... in a sadistic way it would have been fun to see Sasuke and Naruto freaking out at the same time... lol
so, Itachi is already looking for him. He is very paranoid, even when he has a reason to be, Sasuke is getting easily offended...
sorry that he doesn't have a direct line togodyou XD
:D
great chapter hon!
- YuukoUchiha Sep 11, 2008, 10:11 am
[general comment]
Aw~ poor little Naru-chan, I'm very empathic, but I think I can't imagine having powers like he does... in a sadistic way it would have been fun to see Sasuke and Naruto freaking out at the same time... lol
so, Itachi is already looking for him. He is very paranoid, even when he has a reason to be, Sasuke is getting easily offended...
sorry that he doesn't have a direct line togodyou XD
:D
great chapter hon!
- mignonne422 Sep 08, 2008, 6:11 am
[general comment]
Yummy!
I liked that chapter bunches, Kimmy! It was tasty XD
Naruto's nifty powers saved Saucy! And hee hee for the implied sexual tension! XD
LOVE!
- fireun Sep 05, 2008, 5:25 am
[general comment]
This has been a distinct pleasure to read! your writing style is smooth and I am having a blast reading what you have done with the characters. brilliant job. thank you for writing!
- LeiSuna Sep 03, 2008, 8:41 am
[chapter 4]
YAY Another chapter! WOOO! Ugh, this is so good so far! I can't wait for the next one! :DDD
- dobeindenial Aug 28, 2008, 5:18 pm
[general comment]
I have to agree with one of my fellow reviewers. Making Naruto an empath was simply brilliant. Despite his uncanny skill at being completely oblivious at times, I've always thought his ability to really connect with the people around him was what made him so special. And like another reviewer also commented, Sasuke's particular skill also fits his personality well. (Even though I imagine we have quite a bit to see yet before we truly understand their skills.)
Your writing style reads smoothly and encouraged me to keep reading without pause from chapter 1 to chapter 3, filled with just enough description, action, humor and dialogue to make me curse out loud when I finally realized there was no chapter 4. That's how absorbed into the story I was.
But, yeah. Don't want this to get too long, so I'll leave it at this. I look forward to reading more from you.
