Comments & Reviews

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• Reyn Jun 02, 2008, 12:21 am

[chapter 5]

I knew Louis didn't do it!!

Bello worrying over turning into a coffee table made me chuckle a little...and then I realized his fear wasn't completely unsounded and I felt back for chuckling.

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• Reyn Jun 01, 2008, 11:45 pm

[chapter 4]

...and I was a renewable virgin sacrifice.

That line amused me. It's such a great line. *continues to admire said line*

You've got me wondering if Lois is really a traitor in all this. What if it was someone else??

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• Reyn Jun 01, 2008, 11:17 pm

[chapter 3]

You write excellent fight scenes! Bello's personality seems to shine best when he's fighting - a rare talent for authors to pull off successfully :D

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• Reyn May 28, 2008, 10:33 pm

[chapter 2]

Ooooo, now you've got me wondering what Bello is! ...And Santo.

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• Reyn May 28, 2008, 10:16 pm

[chapter 1]

The idea that vampires can't talk around their teeth amuses me greatly XD