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anonymous Nov 17, 2008, 4:33 pm

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I think I might be a tad obsessed lol. I re-read this again today, and found a whole new appreciation for things I might have been trivial with before. eg, Shin, he was good and he did love the Dobe lol.

When I first started my reading, shivers once again my blood curdled over Sasuke. I was surprised once more for my animosity towards him even after knowing the full story, but once again nearing the end I was ready to beat the Dobe up myself lol.

I did soooooooooo appreciate Neji telling Sasuke exactly what he needed to be told, whoohoo!

Now ... where's that epilogue? And FYI heck no! The ending of this chapter is MUCH MUCH MUCH BETTER better than the last lol... we would have missed out on sooooooooooooo much bwaaaaaaaah!

anonymous Nov 14, 2008, 1:56 pm

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OMG! I loved this story!!! You have gained a new fan!!! Great job!

moonmoore Nov 12, 2008, 10:13 am

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Awesome ending! I love it! I loved Neji in this chapter. I love it when others try to protect Naruto. Thanks again for a beautiful story! keep me posted for any new works you post please!

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anonymous Nov 12, 2008, 6:42 am

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me again lol, well it's funny getting the kids ready for school (of all times!) I was struck by how a gradual process getting back together was. I love it!!!

Sasuke ... can I kiss you?

Naruto ... can I kiss you?

I love that! I love how Naruto forced Sasuke to be himself - cause that's love baby!

And I just love how Sasuke being himself was able to finally show Naruto how much he loved him, dang maybe I'm just made of mush sniff!

Thanks again and more cupcakes for you and the muses... you know there's sooooooooooo much room here for a sequel ... hint hint hint :)

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anonymous Nov 11, 2008, 11:54 pm

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My eyes can't make out the magic word so I do hope this review shows :)

Oh my gosh what a ride! I hated Sasuke here he hurt the dobe and I so bad - but realistically of course Sasuke could not forgive being robbed of the chance to avenge his clan to match himself against Itachi and best him.

And of course the dobe did it for him, so he wouldn't slay his own brother. That touches me so deeply, that's the love I believe them capable of and only for each other.

Then of course the dobe had to exasperate and compound everything because he's a dobe right and the teme a stubborn prick.

BTW the almost rape really had me worried! Thank you for not making that turn out ugly because I was thinking even if he had submitted Naruto and I could not have forgiven Sasuke that...but you're a damn good writer with awesome thinking strategies right? :)

As for this chapter, wow! you know I was taught a long time ago that a story was a journey that ended where it began and it is in measuring the value of what one began with that proves the point of the journey. And voila!

Wow so they ended up with what they had begun with but only understood and appreciated it because of what they had gone through.

Brava sending you creampuffs and a bucket of chocolate cupcakes!

Can't wait for more lovely treasures such as this, though I'd be HAPPYYYYYYYYYYYYY with a sequel he he he!

HAPPPPPYYYY BIRTHDAY :)

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anonymous Nov 11, 2008, 11:03 pm

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Again I am only halfway through but I just have to say seeeeeeeeeee!

See how pathetic they both are!!! And gooooooooooo NEJI I knew there was a reason I liked him lol

I so am getting the bat ready to clobber both of them if they don't sort this out soon, but I love it. Now that I am certain they are going to get their act together, this little furyfest, angstridden showdown is delicious! Oh I wish it wouldn't end unless on clouds with trillions of fluff and feathers and me giving them oodles of hugs LOL

Aaaaaaaaaaaarrrrggghhhh gush gush gush!

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anonymous Nov 11, 2008, 10:33 pm

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Oh my gosh you are sooooooooooooooooooooooooo cruel! Is this where you're going to leave it?

Can you not see how utterly pathetic they both are? (Okay so that leaves a whole lotta room for me to comfort them ... he he he ... but if you leave them here they are going to screw it up!!! HELLO one dobe one teme, they need guidance...

Oh my gosh pretty please another chapter...trying not to gush and turn goo goo here!!!

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anonymous Nov 11, 2008, 10:31 pm

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I'm not even halfway through the chapter but I just have to say these two are going to kill me, my bloody loveable dobe and teme dang them they are so screwed up!!! Messing with my mind and heart the bloody idiots, they better sort their act out soon dang it!

LOL oh my poor sanity what have you done to my duo IvvyMoon???

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anonymous Nov 11, 2008, 9:43 pm

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Trust that bloody dobe LOL oh my gosh, I love a passionate, seething with jealousy teme...oh and he came back I want to read how he left that shin wannabe shinobi though LOL you know so I could laugh at him...aww not really, the fact that he found Naruto so loveable is not his own fault and I'm appreciative that he genuinely loved the dobe I just hope he wasn't gracious and spared him for the teme cause that would really peeve me off! lol

I want him to be evil (oh gosh look at me lol, whoops!)

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anonymous Nov 11, 2008, 9:17 pm

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That blooody dobe!!! I want to kick his ass!!!

I can't believe he went that far...obviously I'm still holding out hope, otherwise I'm going to have to practice on some jutsu :)

Dang you made me find Sakura a little bearable...

honestly Naruto you're one dumb a@@sdkfjaksdjfklj

...whoops ... upwards and onwards... I hope, oh let me comfort that teme lol and I'm so going to kick the dobe when he gets back!!!

sniffles... you are cruel :)

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