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questofdreams May 20, 2008, 11:58 am

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I LOVE YOU LIKE THE BURNING POWER OF A THOUSAND SUNS (or Ryohei's EXTREME LOVE which might be arguably more powerful)!!!!

*____________* DANGIT You already own my soul, WHAT ELSE DO I HAVE TO GIVE?! D:

This was beautiful and touching and and and OH THOSE STUPID WONDERFUL BOYS T_T *pets them*

This is going to be multi-chaptered, right!? OMG ADI GOT YOU TO WRITE MULTI-CHAPTERED NARUTO FIC!! *throws giant confetti* Clearly, this day is to be remembered with great distinction. HEHEHE.

Ladelle May 20, 2008, 7:25 am

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I haven't read Epilogue but I think after this I just might.

You have a really incredible sense of rhythm and diction. Your writing just flows and creates some really intense imagery...I definitely want to read more of your work.

I especially liked the end...those poor boys. Every time they think they've got the other figured out, they only grow further apart.

**cries**

BittenKitten May 20, 2008, 4:38 am

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Oooooh, a multichap from Fireun! Could I be more excited? NO! Love the intensity, can't wait for the rest!

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hina88 May 20, 2008, 4:10 am

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Lovely, my favourite thing about this was how you described Naruto, when you mentioned the way he went at Sasuke to me it felt explosive - and Sasuke's smile at the end because Naruto was as worn out as him was just perfect. Completely them. Very nice.

Adi May 20, 2008, 3:57 am

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O______O

you are so amazing you know that? You know that feeling where something cold has washing into your blood and floods your system? THAT IS WHAT THIS FIC DOES TO ME O_O

THANK YOU FIREUN!

Every single line is perfect and quotable for it's perfection. You rule in prose.

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Zrina May 20, 2008, 3:56 am

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I love the intensity that you portray. Very well written fight scenes, easy to follow and they really pull you into the emotions.

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