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[chapter 8]

I like the mix of angst with humor in this chapter. It was nicely balanced. I don't have adult access enabled, so I didn't read the adult scene *thank you for using the censor* I like the poignant ending to this chapter though. Ah... I was just saying today that I could never give up my adoration of Weiss Kreuz. Thanks for continuing this story! I'm so happy that you're still updating icon

 

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  • kitty Aug 30, 2008, 10:35 am

[general comment]

i've been wanting to review this. i really like omi and nagi's interactions--nagi seems like he's really coming together as a real person in omi's eyes, not just an (admittedly gorgeous) enemy. i've never seen Weiss Kreuz but i have read fanfiction about it (um, so i wouldn't know how true to character you really are, but it seems like you're doing it).

and...i just love yohjixaya. hehe. yesss...:D

 

[chapter 4]


“If he ever had Persia’s job he would do it better.”
This one made me do a Jerry Lewis collar pull. Dramatic irony ftw!

“As opposed to Aya who wouldn’t know sex if it fell on his face”
Za-za-za-zing!

“Aya, stood on a pile of bodies like an unrepentant Mayan God”
Fucking awesome, madam.

“It might as well have had ‘I’m an important pimp,’ etched onto the barrel.”
Hurrahs!

Also: The third person account of the Aya/Yohji relationship? All kinds of beautiful.

I also love the powderkeg situation created by four people who are, as they say, “two hot meals away from anarchy” forced into a flower shop with the erstwhile firelighter Nagi. Frickin’ cool.

BTW: I ARE OCHIBAU AND PROUD

 

[chapter 5]

icon okay... I wasn't expecting that kind of resolution to the AyaxYouji issue! I've been wanting to review this for a while, and I'm sorry that I wasn't able to do it sooner ::fails at life:: Thanks for updating! I'm honestly hooked on your NagixOmi and enjoying this read immensely, although I doubt I'll ever read any other writer's attempt at this pairing icon

 

[general comment]

[Chapter 2 & 3]

I so love your story planning and the unfolding, totally spot on characterization. There is a smartness in how you dissect the characters and how the little flagship of the story also divines how his fellows are. Wicked, feckin' cool.

 

[general comment]

When I read this, I had to smile.
It sort of brings back memories of when I watched Weiss in junior high. You got the characters down-pact; this is exactly how they would act! You made Omi so, so cute *pinches his cheeks*. (Aha, but which cheeks? XD)

Pst, pst, I'm a pretty big Yohji fan, btw. icon

 

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  • Reyn May 28, 2008, 10:01 pm

[chapter 2]

Weee, this is me continuing to read, despite not having made any progress on the anime since last time.

Yohji's lines made me laugh. And so did Ken. And Nagi going nuts from being locked in a room and having read everything right down to Yohji's porn amuses me so.

 

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  • Reyn May 26, 2008, 4:38 pm

[chapter 1]

YaY! Look at me trying to read Weiss Kreuz fanfiction when I barely know the characters' names XD

Uhm...Yohji's encounter last night had me laughing. And I liked Omi and the whole university aspect in general *nods*

 

[general comment]

This is me grinding my thumbs into your eyesockets until you write more of this!

"Have you tried wearing a long coat?" Awesome.

I love how you do characterization, and peoples' little internal monologues! Bitchin' cool! Your writing's so snappy and fun! LOVE!

 

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omg omg omg omg omg omg! ::dies all over you:: When the heck did you wake up and decide to become a kick ass awesome writer? I could've sworn when we met you were just awesome icon This is going in so the right direction, and THANK YOU for the Aya x Youji hints (please tell me they are going to get together in this fic icon)

Man... it took me forever to get a chance to read this. I wanted to read this two days ago, but every time I came online, icon was like: 'talk to me' LOLOL! I'm sooooo happy I finally got to read this. I've never read omi-centric fics before as I am a diehard Aya x Youji x Ken fan and tend to read all the fics where any of these bois are main characters (I'm not too picky with weiss pairings so long as one of my faves are featured and none of them are paired solely with Omi) That said, I totally support Omi x Nagi, as I'm pretty sure based on the slashy art by Tsuchiya-sensei and the end of Gluhen that that pairing is actually canon icon

Thank you soooooo much for this gift, and I seriously seriously SERIOUSLY hope you update it soon!