Comments & Reviews

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• anonymous Jul 17, 2008, 7:29 pm

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wow, i really like the way you potray Itsuki in this... i hope you continue it

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• BittenKitten Apr 11, 2008, 1:26 pm

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Wow, very precise and spare, and the more powerful for it. A real sense of teenage thinking in Itsuki that was so moving.

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• milktea Apr 10, 2008, 8:39 pm

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I've never been able to see Itsuki as someone who was not happy, so it's interesting that you've protrayed his smile as a mask. That said, I don't usually read Melancholy fics, so it's kinda hard to critique fandom characterizations. I'll definitely try reading more.