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  • Unspoken
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  • Author: fireun
  • Comments: 1
  • Replies: 0
  • Archived: March 14, 2008
  • Updated: March 14, 2008

[chapter 1]

I liked this ficlet a lot, although it will take me few rereads until I have grasped the full meaning of it. This is not a critique, per se, because I love writing that can be interpreted differently at each read. However, it is your writing style that really attached me to this. Your writing style is very vivid, tangible and feels very visual to me