Tres clever, fireun. And i liked that it didn't result in porn. Don't get me wrong, I'm a huge weiss porn fan, but... I like that this focused on personality rather than sex.
My favorite line hands down is the line where Schuldich gives a nasty smile and says that he didn't know that Youji was keeping score.
I enjoy the weiss/schwarz parings in pretty much every which way but SchuYotan is particularly nice! BTW: have you ever written BradYotan? If you have please share it ::sighs:: it sucks to fan on the least popular pairing, but heh... I'd say that besides AyaYotan or Youji x Aya BradYotan is simple divine!
