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Adi Mar 11, 2008, 6:54 am

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I can not show this enough love. I'll refrain from squealing at you (I'll do it at questy) because thats not cool

But you have the most amazing way of writing, it just flows so perfectly, and is incredibly addicting.

I need more. There has to be more, you'll write more NaruSasu won't you? I adore the way you've characterized Sasuke, that he's saving Naruto, but still how I feel he is as a character.

I particulary loved the description of their first fight <333

questofdreams Mar 10, 2008, 6:45 am

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...wait. IS THAT THE END?! NOOOOOOOOOOOO. DD: WHY IS THERE NOT MORE?!

Oh hun, that was brilliant. Utterly brilliant. I loved how their roles switched up, how Sasuke has to be the one to save Naruto from whatever downward spiral he was getting caught up in... *_* And the imagery in this was just...guh. Stunning. Your way with words never fail to impress. There was that moment between them when they were fighting, where you talk about the motes in the sunlight and...the image it evoked was just wonderful. :D

Awesome work, hun. Thank you!

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