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- Adi Jul 01, 2008, 2:20 am
- IvvyMoon Jun 30, 2008, 7:37 am
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This was so good. It was so...real. They didn't fall into each other like their past wasn't there, and the way you portrayed their emotions was so straightforward while hinting at a lot of hidden depths. Nice.
- animeaddict666 Jun 24, 2008, 9:16 pm
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Utterly perfect. I really really enjoyed the descriptions of smell and feel at the end. Very poignant. I felt so completely WHOLE after reading it.
- Adi Mar 05, 2008, 11:10 am
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I feel like this is perfect, like I couldn't ask for anything more from a piece of writing.
I hope you write more with these two, the characterizations were wonderful.
- Reyn Mar 04, 2008, 10:01 am
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Awwww, this was really cute...in a possessive...grumpy Naruto sort of way XD
- ochiba-chan Mar 02, 2008, 7:24 pm
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fireun
This was wonderful, seriously.
[i]Impulsive, compulsive, Naruto made the first move. He straightened, and if he didn
- questofdreams Mar 02, 2008, 10:22 am
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*cheers* ILU FIREUN. ILU LOTS AND LOTS. *miiiiiiiiiine*
I loved it then and I love it now! It's beautiful and poetic and <3<3<3
