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[general comment]

Oh wow, poor Kyota. I'm really really interested to see what you do with him. (Ugh - is it bad that the OC is my favorite character in this?)

I also found myself wanting to reach through the screen and strangle Yuuri for abusing Wolfram. :( Poor Wolfram puts up with so much.

 

[general comment]

This story is great, it's so awesome to see you writing again. I'm excited to see where you take the story now.

Ever a fan,
Ducky

 

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  • MasterAkira Mar 05, 2008, 1:44 pm

[chapter 1]

That was super cute! I'm so happy that there'll be more in this series. Are you going to be putting this on aff or ff or should I keep checking for more here? Anyways, it's great!

 

[general comment]

I absolutely must read Watch out for the Green Eyes and finish it... this was such a teaser! icon I like the way you portray the pair as adults, and before I start squealing about an update, let me finish reading WoftGE and finish reviewing WotP. Totally icon's your writing!