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  • anonymous Nov 24, 2008, 1:40 pm

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Oh, before I forget...THIS STORY BETTER HAVE A F@#%ING HAPPY ENDING! AT LEAST AS GOOD AS IT CAN GET BETWEEN NARUTO AND SASUKE! ahhh

 

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  • anonymous Nov 24, 2008, 1:37 pm

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Wow, now wonder I had so much trouble understanding everything that was going on. I read what you have of this story, and didn't know that there was 'Misery Business' before this.

 

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  • anonymous Nov 19, 2008, 10:41 am

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dfghdfhgdfghdfkjgdlfghdf!!!!!!!!!111 This is novel worthy! Its been a good month at least since I've read a good Naruto fanfiction, because I think I've read most of them. But this is not just good, this is amazing! How did you come up with such a plot? Write this? Gah, its amazing! Where have you been all my life?!?! Whew, I think I blazed through these 17 chapters in less than 24 hours. I'm supposed to be writing a paper. All I gotta say is that I hope to god that Naruto and Sasuke somehow end up with each other at the end. The story feels like its barely started, but its already torn at my heart! Emotional rollercoaster, sheesh. But I love rollercoasters!

 

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You know...this chapter is still making me feel really bad for Naruto...even though he did punch Danzo. XD Go Naruto! And what is Sasuke going to do and think when he finds out????

 

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  • Reyn Nov 08, 2008, 10:53 am

[chapter 17]

YAY! Naruto PUNCHED Danzo! *^o^* ooooo, I wanna see what happens when Haku and Kotetsu approach Suigetsu!! Write more now!

 

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  • Reyn Nov 08, 2008, 10:26 am

[chapter 16]

I love you. You managed to have Naruto talk to someone (and a surprising someone) about Danzo and there was still all this angst and heartache and...I love you.

 

[chapter 17]

AND THE PLOT THICKENS!!!!
Why Ladelle san, i feel like as if its my birthday today!!! Thank you so much for the awesome chapter!!! OwO

 

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This is such a messed up situation for Naruto! Poor guy. he really just doesn't know what to do anymore, and it seems like the thing he wants to do the most will end up hurting so many people! Ladelle! Make it better! *pokes out bottom lip*

 

[chapter 16]

WHAT.NO.WAIT.GYYYRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH SUIGESTSU = WORST TIMING EVER, HE LIED SASUKE, HE LIED, well actually he didnt but DONT BELIEVE HIM, HE TWISTED HIS WORDS!!!!!
And whatddya mean its halfway concluded, NUU dont tell me your going to end it at Sasuke and Naruto hating each other for a misunderstanding!! SASUKE SHU FUUUL, OPEN YER EYES AND SEE THE TRUTH!!!
Ooooohh the tension!!! The tensionnn!! @.@

 

[chapter 15]

Kimmy!!

That made me so sad! Poor Naruto! Poor Sasuke! Omg, woman, this better have a happy ending!

*sniffles*

It was wunderbar though. Very awesomely written. icon