Comments & Reviews

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• fireun Mar 14, 2008, 8:38 am

[general comment]

so, after getting to the end of the first chapter, let me say i am enjoying the tension, and i am really happy with the revelation not being the magical relationship bandage that it could have become in a fit of cliche. nicely in character, and looking forward to reading the rest. right now.

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• milktea Mar 02, 2008, 7:56 pm

[chapter 5]

Cliff hanger...

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• milktea Feb 22, 2008, 7:13 am

[general comment]

Rewatching Weiss Kreuz as I follow your story, BittenKitten *^o^* Admittedly, there are some parts where you jump around a bit (e.g., minimal connect the dots build up to the revelation that Ken and Aya were already intimate, or the previous acknowledgment of Kase followed by the insistence that Ken wasn't gay) and where the story seems a bit on the fantastic side, but you know what... I found this story rather charming~♥ and enjoyed both chapters For sheer fangirlism this fic owns! But for writing feedback (for future stories), I would suggest taking a bit more time when building up revelations.

I am really looking forward to your next update! Please post soon *^o^* I'll be stalking all your WK fics now, so be prepared!