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  • Alura Jul 15, 2008, 11:42 am

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Oooo! This was awesome! I love how you showed what an almost addictive love can do to people. Cause themto make stupid decisions, like trying to help a vampire. Or make them stay away to "save" the one they love. Very interesting.

 

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  • Distant-Sky-King Feb 05, 2008, 8:52 pm

[chapter 1]

This is good. You've got a knack for description and your style of writing kept me interested. I particularly liked the main characters narration. It was humorous, but grisly at times.

I'm a pending member, right now, so I can't favorite this, but I do intend to keep an eye on it and look at the other chapters as well!

 

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  • Reyn Jan 10, 2008, 12:17 am

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Awwww...it's over 8(

It was an interesting read! I'm glad the ending was a happy one ^_^