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THAT WAS BRILLIANT. O______O Why is there not more?! *searches frantically*

 

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‘I just got laid by a man,’ he reflected, ‘I should probably draw significant conclusions from that.’

OH ED XDDDD I adore his rational brain <33333

That was wonderful... poor Roy T_T I'm glad the whole Santi thing was there to cut off his emotional/mental breakdown.

 

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“He is the younger brother? But you are the little one.”

This did not make Ed like Santi any better.


roflmao! <33 ILU ED icon

Did all the serial killers of the world just wait for him to happen by so that they could be insane at him?

That does seem the case sometimes with the Elrics, doesn't it? XDD

AWWWW WHAT AN AWESOME CHAPTER *_* Roy is so seriously screwed DDDD:

 

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THIS FIC HAD BETTER BE FINISHED!! *spies the word 'completed'*

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zomg BK that first chapter was INSANELY GOOD. *_* Envy OH GOD ENVY <3333 I adore Envy (despite that a good part of me also hopes he dies in a fire for killing Hughes T___T). Envy sounded so true to the anime version of him, I loooooooove it. AND ROY T_T THE POOR MAN.

I can't wait to read more OMG! XD

 

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  • anonymous May 20, 2008, 3:28 am

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I'd really like to read this story. The first chapter looked really good. I can definitely see Envy stirring up this sort of mess. And maybe I've become a little bitter but I almost cried when I saw that your story was well-written. Characterization! Plot! Grammar! But your story is censored and you don't seem the type to write smut without characterization so I'd like to read the censored bits. Do you have this story up on another site? Livejournal or AFF?

 

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D;

I don't read a lot of FMA fanfics... *issa narutard through and through*

...buuut, whenever I do, they always seem to be really engaging fics. And yours definitely fits the mold.

I think that its really hard to make an OC fit into the canon universe, but Santi felt like he belonged...so deranged XD, he was great...too bad envy just killed him in a fit of whim!

Looking forward to the next chapter. I'm sure Envy will have more mischief up his sleeve...