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erisabesu Aug 25, 2008, 5:59 am

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Oh, this was neato!!! I love how you used structure to amplify meaning. So awesome. <3

ochiba-chan Apr 03, 2007, 7:28 pm

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That's pretty funky! Wai~♥ and a gift for me?! Thank you, Ami-chama! You are too sweet. I saw this on the side page, and was like, oh Ami's posted another work... must read. Then I opened up the writing section and was like GIFT FOR ME?! HUZZAH?! ::happy:: Thank you so much! I think I should write up an alert for members when they receive gifts ^_^;;

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Jae Apr 02, 2007, 7:19 pm

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I must say, I do like the dynamic flow of this piece. It's clever the way you've treated the "e".

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