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DUUUDE. How long has it been since you've updated this here?! Are you editing the chapters before you post them? I can barely remember the characters anymore D:

I definitely want to re-read this though :D it was amazing and I believe you left off with them parading across the countryside XDD I hope you plan to finish this some day :D

 

[general comment]

I love the way you described his dance. There is a nice tension between Dia and Kaio which it would be wonderful to see more of *^o^*

 

[general comment]

teeeheee....I started this and then time became an issue and I couldn't continue so now I will jump back to your LJ and pick up b/c I forgot how much I adore Kaio. YAAAY!