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The Föhn in my Mind

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To: Nicotine

Posted: November 15, 2008 @ 12:16 pm

so the descriptions aren't like, really boring and slow the pace?

I'm glad you liked it! icon

To: BittenKitten

Posted: November 15, 2008 @ 12:14 pm

oh good, I was worried all my background info would drag the pace in the mud!

And yeah... Jack put his foot so far in his mouth he'll be shitting rubber. But Kailani is a sweetie and gets things like that all the time, besides there will be some explaining later!

To: Serenade

Posted: September 28, 2008 @ 11:16 am

I hope that your medical troubles are sorted soon but you must devote yourself to getting better and not worry about updates!

It's sort of nice to have to wait actually. I like anticipation!

To: BittenKitten

Posted: September 27, 2008 @ 8:52 pm

oh my, spontaneous combustion is bad! (I think its funny that I write great sex scenes, and I'm like a-sexual).
I'll try to keep the happiness flowing for you, but I'm having some medical problems right now, so it might be a while, sorry!

To: BittenKitten

Posted: September 24, 2008 @ 1:24 pm

Ahh shucks, your going to make me blush! No really, I love it when reviewers use words like "syntax". Glad you enjoyed!

To: BittenKitten

Posted: September 21, 2008 @ 12:34 pm

oh my! I'll try and find one, so you don't have to! (but thanks so much for the offer!)

To: Serenade

Posted: September 21, 2008 @ 12:17 pm

Jack reads so well that it would never occur to the reader that he was anything but easy for you to write. It's very accomplished characterisation. I love him.

If we can't rustle you up a beta over the next month or so I will put aside a day and do it for you myself!

I like it that much!

To: BittenKitten

Posted: September 21, 2008 @ 12:14 pm

I'm glad you think so, Jack is a hard sucker to write, and sometimes I struggle with him. icon

Yeah I know there are lots of typos, and its just that with my learning disabilities its hard to edit. (also, I'm to lazy to beta hunt...)

To: BittenKitten

Posted: September 21, 2008 @ 8:33 am

if you tried, Jack would be a total asshole about it too, icon

To: Serenade

Posted: September 21, 2008 @ 8:29 am

Fantastic! I am really looking forward to more. I have totally fallen in love with Jack and may try to steal him from Michael (yeah, right, like I could...but a girl can dream!)