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Within a Forest Dark
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To: lambent
To: Reyn
To: lambent
To: Reyn
Posted: June 02, 2008 @ 9:46 pm
Hmm. I'm not sure what gave you the impression that Louis wasn't a traitor. He wasn't responsible for Santo's interest in him -- that was Benedict, pissed off after the Hans affair. But the alley sex scene was just a memory, and one less recent than the first one. I suppose I should make that more clear. ::ponders edits::
Thanks for the feedback!
To: lambent
Posted: June 02, 2008 @ 8:37 am
Oh no, your fight scenes are very intense and excellently written! They really add to the emotion of the piece rather than making things choppy and step by step.
To: Reyn
Posted: June 01, 2008 @ 11:43 pm
Bello is very much a fighter. And thank you so much for the compliment.
I always get worried when I write a fight scene that it's boring or awkward or both, so thanks for the reassurance.
To: lambent
Posted: May 29, 2008 @ 1:13 pm
Awwww! Authors here are sometimes slow when it comes to checking out stories *like me* We're big profile spammers, though...
To: lambent
To: Reyn
Posted: May 28, 2008 @ 10:52 pm
Wonder on! Bello will remain a mystery for a while.
Mine is a cruel, cruel laugh.
To: Reyn
Posted: May 28, 2008 @ 10:51 pm
Have you ever put on fake fangs? They're hard to talk around!
Thanks for the lovely feedback, as always. I was getting all sad and pouty that this story had no comments.
