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Summary: A simple poem about loving someone who's already in love with someone else.
One Broken Heart
© Ami
One Broken Heart
Chapter 1 Notes
October 03, 2008 @ 7:30 pm
True story. Makes me sad, but I'm working on it!
This isn't supposed to be "emo" or anything like that ... people usually feel inspired by love (or the lack thereof) whether they're writers or not (like me).
Hope you enjoy, anyway! Thinking of removing the fourth stanza ... don't like the rhyming of perfect and detect ... kinda lame ...
