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Summary: Naruto kills Itachi, and Sasuke can't forgive him for it. Sasuke gets his revenge, but what happens when he goes too far? Can he get Naruto back? SasuNaru some SasuSaku at first, eventual NaruSasuNaru. This is not a Naruto-bashing fic.

Breaking him down

Disclaimer: Naruto belongs to Masashi Kishimoto et al.

Breaking him down

Chapter 16 Notes

November 10, 2008 @ 6:18 am

So this is it! The official last chapter of BHD. There will be an epilogue after this, but this monster – seriously, this chapter is almost as long as the whole story Second Chances – is the resolution chapter that people wanted. I guess you could say this was an optional chapter for those that liked the ending of the last chapter. I liked the ending of the last chapter personally…

Anyway, this chapter is dedicated to WordSlave, because she is bribing me with a gift fic for finishing this. Lol, and I know I’ve been bad and working on other stuff instead of giving this my full attention, but I think I made up for it in length. Whew.

And this is beta’d by Master of the Rebels. Love her.

Chapter 15 Notes

October 06, 2008 @ 1:28 pm

So this chapter is dedicated to WordSlave, because she has bribed me to finish BHD before anything else with the promise of a gift fic, and greedy bitch that I am, I have accepted. XDXD Technically, this is supposed to be the last chapter of BHD and then the epilogue…but we’ll discuss this again at the end of the chapter.

Oh, and for those of you that read the last chapter the first day I posted it, I actually changed the last sentence. It’s not a big change, but I was unhappy with it, and I like it better this way.

Thanks so much to my beta, the amazing Master of the Rebels, for checking over this. She has finished my gift fic, Maple River, which is absolutely wonderful, on ff.net, so please go read it. www. fanfiction. net/s/ 4518980 /1/ Maple_River Plus! The incredible Allys created gift art for the both of us, so please look at that as well. yaoi. y-gallery.net /view/ 470998/ Remove spaces to get to the links.

Yes, I am incredibly spoiled. I admit it.

Chapter 14 Notes

September 21, 2008 @ 1:06 pm

Ladelle discovered the theme song for this fic! Keri Hilson’s “Energy.” I meant to mention this in the last chapter, but I completely forgot. Oops. Anyway, Ladelle is wonderfully fantastic, and she has given me so many compliments and suggestions for this story that I am in love, love, LOVE!! I actually wanted to try to put some lyrics for the song in the story, but it didn’t work out. *frowns* I also forgot to mention that Ladelle was very helpful when I was writing Second Chances for Allys. So everyone, please love and fawn over Ladelle – assuming you already don’t. XD

Once again, Master of the Rebels beta’d this for me. She is writing me a gift fic, Maple River on fanfiction . net, so please check it out. Hahahahahaha! I have a gift fic! *swoons*

And see? It didn’t take me five months to update this time. Yeah me!

Chapter 13 Notes

August 30, 2008 @ 1:52 pm

Finally, an update! After…almost 3 months…oops… Um…yeah… But! I have posted like three, four? other stories in the meantime, so please check them out.

Anyway, this was an extremely hard chapter for me to write. I had a horrible case of writer’s block. I think it took almost three weeks to come out. Although, on the bright side of things, I have plot bunnies for two other stories. I have to give credit to my awesome beta, Master of the Rebels, for helping to kick start my brain. She gave me such great ideas for this angsty chapter.

So I hope the wait was worth it.

Chapter 8 Notes

May 21, 2008 @ 12:47 am

Okay, so here it is, a NaruSasu lemon. Many thanks to Master of the Rebels for beta’ing, support and helping me with the lemon.

Chapter 7 Notes

May 21, 2008 @ 12:46 am

Many thanks to Master of the Rebels for beta’ing! Besides correcting all my numerous mistakes, she also provided all the jutsu translations, which is awesome since I don’t know a lick of Japanese. Possible lemon next chapter!

Chapter 6 Notes

May 21, 2008 @ 12:44 am

Once again, thanks to my beta Master of the Rebels who has been a great help to me. This chapter is dedicated to her since I am already on chapter 6 (wow!), and if it weren’t for her death threats, I might have stopped after chapter 1.

Chapter 4 Notes

May 21, 2008 @ 12:42 am

This chapter advances the plot. Why, you ask, did I include a plot? I have no idea. Plots are hard. *sulks* Finally, from here on out, Naruto will be officially OOC since obviously this would never happen, and I’m going to throw in a Sasuke is OOC just for insurance purposes. Once again, thanks to the gracious Master of the Rebels for beta’ing this.

Chapter 3 Notes

May 21, 2008 @ 12:40 am

I hope you will hate Sasuke just a little less after this. Thanks to Master of the Rebels for beta’ing. She rocks!

Chapter 2 Notes

May 21, 2008 @ 12:38 am

Just to let you know, Naruto does get better...