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I have a love/hate relationship with this since I rushed it. =/

Some points I see need fixing:
- Lighting (wtf is going on?)
- Shadows ( related to the lighting, the ribs of the left side of the image should cast a shadow. You can see my rushed craptastic attempt)
- the BIRDS. The placement could definitely be improved. I wish I thought this thing out more and planned.
- the angle of the "heart" made my brain explode.

Some points that are working:
- I like the concept.
- Uh...Contrast. Yeah. I think that's the main thing working for me right now. The effing contrast.

• Medium: Graphite Pencils (HB, B, 4B, 6B, Lead Pencil 05) »
• Time: 420 Minutes

• Artist: N3L
• Comments: 8
• Faves: 3
• Posted: 02-16-08

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